Elipsis

I found this old one on my Web site, it was my 3rd song i ever wrote, i re-did it a little bit so it would fit to music a little better. im planning to have it recorded for all you to listen to. (I tried to fix most of the typo's while revising it... hopefully i got em all)

Sound of the Sea

I’m in my home but
my home isn’t there
Feels like I left
My Spirit somewhere
I need to go my Home
Back to the sound of the sea


Skipped half my life
And went from A to C
I’ve just been born
Now I’m dying
I Got no tribe
Because Everyone else just kills me from the inside

I’m in my home but
my home isn’t there
Feels like I left
My Spirit somewhere
I need to go Back home
Back to the sound of the sea

Those Tranquil thoughts
Those god damn memories
They keep me alive
When I’m about to freeze
Those lonely Walk
Don’t that same ol' Street


Cigarettes and bubblegum
And a grin from cheek to cheek

I’m in my home but
my home isn’t there
Feels like I left
My Spirit somewhere
I need to go to my home
Back to the sound of the sea

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demon_

You know... my third lyrics ever written was no where as good as this.

Great visual. Kinda got boring in parts, but it's cool.



Demon

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Elipsis

thanks much

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evadri

The verses and bridge are very strong (though I still see some typos!). The chorus is lyrical. I like 'sound of the sea' - that's a nice hook.

Would like to hear it!

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