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07-02-2006, 11:44 PM
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Regret
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Last edited by Bika : 10-10-2006 at 12:16 AM.
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07-02-2006, 11:47 PM
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I like it, but I cant give you a clear reason why. It just has a feeling behind it that just pulls me in...
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07-03-2006, 12:56 PM
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Originally Posted by sanctuary
I like it, but I cant give you a clear reason why. It just has a feeling behind it that just pulls me in...
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i agree. it almost seems like a Poe poem or something and thats what i like about it
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07-03-2006, 10:54 PM
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i agree. it almost seems like a Poe poem or something and thats what i like about it
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A comparison to Poe? Too kind... thank you!
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07-04-2006, 05:31 PM
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Nice visual, but the song it's self was kinda-sorta cliche; however, you really put that factor aside with the visual and stuff.
Recommend: a title change, and arranging it yourself.
 
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07-04-2006, 06:49 PM
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Originally Posted by demon_
Nice visual, but the song it's self was kinda-sorta cliche; however, you really put that factor aside with the visual and stuff.
Recommend: a title change, and arranging it yourself.
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why change the title? The most cliche thing you can do is use the title in the song over and over. I'd say keep it the way you intended it to be
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07-04-2006, 06:54 PM
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There won't be a title change. The title is what the song is about.
Thanks for the feedback 
I won't arrange it here, either.
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