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07-01-2006, 07:33 AM
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Member
Join Date: Jun 2006
Posts: 10
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Feeling lost
Feeling Lost
Verse:
I feel lost,
even though I,
know I belong,
to you dad.
Tears from in
my eyes starting
a river.
Not knowing what,
direction to go.
Chorus:
At night I,
cry feeling like,
a part of me
is weak.
My soul is
trembling.
I am trying.
to reach for
your hand.
Verse:
Inside my soul,
is aching.
you only one,
who can soothe,
my soul.
Thought inside of.
won't quiet down.
You're the only,
doctor I need.
chorus:
At night I
cry feeling likes
a part of
me is weak.
I am trying,
to reach for
your hand.
verse:
I am frightened,
brother.
Satan is telling,
me lies about,
everything.
Telling I am,
going to lose,
My dad to him.
Yelling at me,
that I will
lose everyone I
touch.
Chorus:
I won't let him,
invade my soul.
You're the only
one who can
help me.
Stop him please,
help me father.
Chorus:
At I cry
feeling like a
part of me
is weak.
My soul is,
trembling.
I am try,
to reach for
your hand.
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07-02-2006, 12:35 AM
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#2
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Ink Slinger
Join Date: Apr 2006
Gender: Male
Posts: 2,358
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I like this. The fear evident, a touch of desperation.
Healer/healing might suit better than doctor?
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