Needles To Say - Page 2 - Writers Forum

demon_ · 06-30-2006, 11:52 AM

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EDIT: also you call them simple metephors right after you say they need thinking. Do yourself a favor and think before you write. Dont try to get down on everyone just because nobody here knows you. The more you do, the more people hate you for trying to disguise your 14 year old personality

Ooooh... someone's getting hostile. XD

I totally agree with you though, I should act my age and start crying in my corner and start writing little entries in my pretty pink dairy. Elipsis, you don't know me, please don't tell me what you expect out of my age... seriuosly, I hate that.

Look, if you guys egt so hostile on my opinion, just say it to and I'll stop reading your stuff. It's that simple. It helps me save time for people more seriuos with there work...

And, yes, I do understand metaphors well and give me a link, I'll do what I can; I'm not perfect, Mr. Hostile.

Demon

ps: were you guys little akward kids that were told to shut up when you were 14 or something trying to express yourself? Well, it seems like that, leave me alone on it. XD My God...

Spazola · 06-30-2006, 11:59 AM

I liked this a lot. It sounds like (in my opinion) it would make a good heavy metal song. Good job! ^_^

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The more you do, the more people hate you for trying to disguise your 14 year old personality

Hey! Fourteen year olds can be mature.

Not that I'm claiming to be mature or anything. But I COULD be, if I wanted to. >_> =p

demon_ · 06-30-2006, 12:03 PM

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Originally Posted by Spazola

I liked this a lot. It sounds like (in my opinion) it would make a good heavy metal song. Good job! ^_^

Hey! Fourteen year olds can be mature.

Not that I'm claiming to be mature or anything. But I COULD be, if I wanted to. >_> =p

hey, thanks for the read, Spazola... it's actually suppose to be a screamo hardcore... pretty close to metal, lol.

I'm not mature - lol. I just know better than be underminded by people who think 14 year old no nothing or should be a certain way... (hiding under my personality...pfffftttttt!) How stereotypical can you be?

Anyway, thanks for the read, thanks for the argument... both are appreciated...

Demon

EDIT: I just found out my stereo typer is 15!!!!!!!!! Oh, my... I should have respected my elder... XD So many years more of experience...lol

I probably look older than your father...

Mystery · 06-30-2006, 12:53 PM

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Originally Posted by demon_

Ooooh... someone's getting hostile. XD

I totally agree with you though, I should act my age and start crying in my corner and start writing little entries in my pretty pink dairy. Elipsis, you don't know me, please don't tell me what you expect out of my age... seriuosly, I hate that.

Look, if you guys egt so hostile on my opinion, just say it to and I'll stop reading your stuff. It's that simple. It helps me save time for people more seriuos with there work...

And, yes, I do understand metaphors well and give me a link, I'll do what I can; I'm not perfect, Mr. Hostile.

Demon

ps: were you guys little akward kids that were told to shut up when you were 14 or something trying to express yourself? Well, it seems like that, leave me alone on it. XD My God...

When teh fuck did you turn from a really cool dude into a complete fucking 12 year old asshole?
Hit puberty with a bump did we?
I wrote something with such obvious metaphor you told me "the meaning was too bland" and now im laughing my ass off at how stupid your being.
Really dude. wtf.

Forewarning - don't play the pwn game with me, I'm much better at it >.>

Elipsis · 06-30-2006, 01:09 PM

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Originally Posted by demon_

Ooooh... someone's getting hostile. XD

I totally agree with you though, I should act my age and start crying in my corner and start writing little entries in my pretty pink dairy. Elipsis, you don't know me, please don't tell me what you expect out of my age... seriuosly, I hate that.

Look, if you guys egt so hostile on my opinion, just say it to and I'll stop reading your stuff. It's that simple. It helps me save time for people more seriuos with there work...

And, yes, I do understand metaphors well and give me a link, I'll do what I can; I'm not perfect, Mr. Hostile.

Demon

ps: were you guys little akward kids that were told to shut up when you were 14 or something trying to express yourself? Well, it seems like that, leave me alone on it. XD My God...

Im sorry, but theres a difference from acting mature and trying to be a total douche every chance you get. I totaly agree with Mystery, grow up and dowt try to pull yourself into conversations that will get people to examine how much of an asshole you really are.

Yes i am 15... At least im acting in a way thats not shouting "Hey look at me! Im a douchebag! I'm gunna tell everyone to fuck off and leave me alone because im an individual!"

demon_ · 06-30-2006, 08:12 PM

I am a complete douch bag... aren't I?

Mystery, most of that was pure sarcasm... but I find no need to explain myself. It's okay if we mis understand ourselves once in awhile.

Demon's cool with it.

And I was always an ass.

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Forewarning - don't play the pwn game with me, I'm much better at it >.>

It's okay. I won't. I know you are. No matter how much you hate me now (for realizing how big of a prick I can be), you'll still one of my favourite lyricts. (however, I love arguing). I like how you said "pwn" XD

Demon

ps: I'm 14. Puberty hit me when I was 12... after that, I laugh at seriuos and hostile people and bgeame an ass. Sorry I showed it off now. Anyways, see you guys around...

Oasis Writer · 07-01-2006, 01:53 AM

Powerful words, vivid imagry, wonderful thoughts, and great themes of indurement

If any of that makes sense. Nice song, I actually think this is a little better than usual from you. I did have a question as well, I see Needles. And then I saw Needless in your song. Is the title incorrect? Otherwise, this is one of the "mad songs"

I'd expect from you. I hope one day I get to hear it.