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Old 06-28-2006, 09:52 AM   #1
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Old 06-28-2006, 10:04 AM   #2
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I liked it but I felt it was a too repetive at the end...maybe you could have made it a differet verse. Other then that, it was good.
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Thanks. It is a bit, but, really, that's all this lyric has to say.

As an aside, I've decided to stop putting in <verse>/<chorus/<things> at the ends of my lyrics. More relevant to an arrangement of them, I think.
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Old 06-28-2006, 04:50 PM   #4
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Hey I liked it Bika. Definatly a new shine to your stuff. Really told me sort of a story though lacked some emotion. Why would you let out your DemonS!? That's crazy talk...

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