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06-27-2006, 08:11 PM
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Different
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Last edited by Bika : 10-10-2006 at 12:12 AM.
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06-27-2006, 08:15 PM
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A lot of this I felt was too blunt and cliche. The choruses, however, were very good. The whole "uniqueness" topic is used a lot, so I guess I'm just looking for a more original way of writing about it. Heh, how ironic - writing about originiality in an unoriginal way. Sorry if this is harsh, but it's just my opinion. I think you have something going here.
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06-27-2006, 08:16 PM
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That's half the point 
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06-27-2006, 08:18 PM
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So you're going for the irony? Heh, I can just picture a band like Good Charlotte or Simple Plan singing this ... and not because of the irony. If that's what you were going for, I think you should make it more obvious, maybe in the end or something.
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06-27-2006, 08:20 PM
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Not irony 
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06-27-2006, 08:21 PM
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Then what?! Hah, I'm slow. Seriously. Very slow. So just let me know! Ah, I made a rhyme.
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06-27-2006, 08:23 PM
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Not yet
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Every artist is a cannibal; Every poet is a thief All kill the inspiration; and sing about the grief - U2
Say what you mean, and mean what you say.
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06-27-2006, 08:26 PM
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!!!
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06-27-2006, 08:28 PM
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I'd like to see other folks opinions/comments before I say
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06-28-2006, 04:25 AM
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Originally Posted by mandax
So you're going for the irony? Heh, I can just picture a band like Good Charlotte or Simple Plan singing this ... and not because of the irony. If that's what you were going for, I think you should make it more obvious, maybe in the end or something.
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Jesus.
Terry bozzio + Steve morse for this = win.
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06-28-2006, 07:28 AM
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a nice little commentary on life, I enjoyed it.
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06-28-2006, 04:54 PM
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I liked it, but no real opinion on it. Don't know why....
Good stuff,
 
Demon
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