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Old 06-03-2006, 10:23 PM   #1
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Song - Your heart to win

when you return tired and cold,
all that I want is to hold you.
you're a beaten, weary old soul,
I wish that my words could soothe.

chorus:
With open arms I'll take you in,
a sweet carress for your heart to win.
When this day is gone and passed,
the memories can always last.

when your stressed and lost control,
don't forget that I'll always care.
think of the quiet love you stole,
and know that I'll be standing there.

*chorus*

I'll carry you in my arms,
and touch your forhead with a kiss.
To keep you safe of any harm,
and linger there like a mist.

pick you up when you are down,
and wipe your tears before they fall.
Holding on to the silent sound,
wrapped in the beauty of it all.

*chorus* x2
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Old 06-04-2006, 07:13 AM   #2
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thats such a sweet thing to say to someone.. beautiful and charming!

just one thing--
Quote:
your a beaten, weary old soul,
it should be you're
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Old 06-04-2006, 08:31 PM   #3
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thats such a sweet thing to say to someone.. beautiful and charming!

just one thing--


it should be you're
yea, I'm lazy I knew that though , thanks for the compliment, I feel kinda bad though because all my stuff is love songs now, whic is awesome, I'm writing, but I hate getting stuck on one track...
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Old 06-05-2006, 04:39 AM   #4
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maybe you are concentrating too much on that aspect of your life .. someone is influencing your lyrics!!
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