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Old 05-30-2006, 05:58 PM   #1
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Waves of Yellow

I'm still working on it. Its about someone i know as a child but is now on anti-depressants and how much she has changed.

Waves of Yellow

When you played in the weeds
Flowing like a yellow sea
And laugh and skip and scream
Till you could no longer breathe
And all the dangerous things
That slept and woke with ease

[chorus]
But now your heart is aching
With all the pills you are taking
And they work to surpress your mind

Now you drive past the weeds
Flowing like a yellow sea
Feel nothingness it seems
And you walk into work
Where the dangers first lurked
A depression surpression disease



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Old 05-30-2006, 09:16 PM   #2
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its workinmg, finish it, I want an end, I have this unfinished feeling of loss. good job so far.
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Old 06-01-2006, 09:37 PM   #3
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im having alot of trouble working out an end to this piece. I guess its written from experience and i havent yet lost the person i'm writing about. Maybe with the right instrumentals, i can make what i have work
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Old 06-02-2006, 08:45 PM   #4
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I like it also

I'm sorry for the loss, or losing...

When it's available I would like to see the rest of it

Good luck with an ending.
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