Mystery

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This topic contains several posts from me and will be updated regularly, not only is it a hassle to constantly make new topics when I could keep one I update but also I want to get some feedback on older stuff to see where I went wrong.
Also don't give grammar/spellcheck's to me, I know about those, if I cared about them more the the meaning, content or words of my lyrics I'd take the time to fix them, Detailed descriptions are welcome but all I want is outline feedback.

Thanks for your time





Never cared -
V1-
Stalemate with my own reflection
Im whispering into my own ears
I look into the darkness and it stares back at me
What happened to the light your smile brought..

Bridge-
I remember you left and your words were so clear
I refure to remember "their right, I dont belong here"

Chorus
I never cared for what they'd say
I never cared for what they'll do
I never cared for what they wanted
I only ever cared for you

I never cared for what they'd tell
I never cared for what they did
I never cared for any of them
I only gave a shit for you

V2-
My windowframe is teasing me with fresh air
My bed is kneeing me in my back
MY pillow is twisting like a nether
Why wont they let me sleep? OR is it my fault

Bridge-
I walk out through the front door
I know ill find you somehow

Chorus
I never cared for what they'd say
I never cared for what they'd do
I never cared for what they wanted
I only ever cared for you

You never needed to impress me
you never needed to spoil me
You never needed anything but me
I only...ever..care...

End-(its sung very low tone)
Never cared for what they say

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Mystery

Never there

Verse-
One day,
The pendulum swings harder hitting on my head,
Tick tock it hammers deeper while I try not to bend
Im trying to not let my anger get the best of me
The fustrations overwhelming and its starting to get to me

Bridge-
Trying to think it over, trying to think it over
But the time keeps passing, the time keeps passing
And im not a virtuous man

Chorus-
You tried to take my heart
You tried to take my mind
You tried to take my soul
And I took yours in kind

I screamed and protested,
To you my anger directed
It wasn’t your fault you just loved me

(and in the end the joke is on me
These things were never there)

Verse 2-
Two day,
Searching through the door wheres the painkillers
Im hearing screaming in the distance
Im trying to find the source its persistant
Im not realising its coming from inside of me

Chorus rep.

Verse 3-
Three day,
The painkillers are starting to become and addiction
Im still losing time in a forfeit affection
I heard life is the longest thing Ill ever do
Right now this is seeming longer because I don’t have you

Chorus rep.

End
Four day,
Tick tock still hitting at my head
Five day,
Insanity sleeping with me in my bed
Six day
Nightmares waking me before Im prepared
Seven day
Weeks over now im bleeding from my head

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Mystery

Tease me please me

V1
I want to touch you so much
I want to feel your skin
I want to feel your lips
I want to look into your eyes
And know that’s where my soul’s been

Bridge-
But you wont let me
Im second in line for you
I don’t compare…

Chrous-
Tease me
But never please me
Play with me, don’t break me
Im not made of glass but plastic cracks
My mind follows
My heart hollow’s..
Out…

V2-
God so much I want to love you
Want to tell you I want you
Want to tell you I worship you
Your body is my temple
Aint been no services 1942

Chorus rep

Endverse-
So yeah, I love you,
Not like its getting me anywhere…

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Mystery

More than love

Verse1

Sometimes im searching,
But I don’t know what im looking for, or where to find it
Sometimes I find it
But I don’t know if its is it or if its something just like it

See now that the problem
Of trying to find, the key to your emotions
What you didn’t leave behind,
They say it’s an equation with an answer undefined
It’s either one or nothing, its rattles and battles in your mind
But the truth is that nothing can be answered with an answer written in a language you can’t understand
Running for an errand in someone’s place as if you even can
Everything boils down to one point
And at this decision its where you get caught
You have to decide with one question or naught
If your lover is one person you can love or the one with which love you were taught


Chorus-
Im looking, for you
Somewhere-far-beyond-you-eye sight
Im looking, for you
Somewhere-far-beyonde-your-fan-ta-sy
Cuz I want you now with me, more than love
I want to embrace you, more than love
It’s a simple request, wont you fulfil my quest
And come to me, I need you more than love

Verse 2
Sometimes im searching,
But I don’t know what im looking for, or where to find it
Sometimes I here but
I don’t know what im here for

Something I can’t even explain to you
It’s more complicated more than the emotion im looking for
Cuz the minute you think you got, that’s the minute you have lost it
Never knowing what its another persons mind
You can change what is left to find
And answer or a riddle something you want, the one will bring you peril, the other you’ love
That’s the way it is with this thing
Its all a game of cat and mouse in this thing
No matter what struggle the cat always wins
And no matter what you do or you can do that fact remains that
You are the mouse
And the woman is the cat


Chorus-
Im looking, for you
Somewhere-far-beyond-you-eye sight
Im looking, for you
Somewhere-beyond-your-tri-cke-ry
Cuz I want to get to love you, more than love
And I want to get to please you, more than love,
But every time I try I lose, just like love
And every time you run away, just like where in love

end
Just-like-where-in love(x
Then why do you have to test me,
Play tricks with my mind,
Questions just to see me
As another kind




this is one seriously weird/complicated lyrics that im prolly gonna rewrite

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Mystery

Kingdom without a king

v1
There is a kingdom
Unnatural wonder
Things you could only, touch in your dreams
It lies in a lost place
Forgotten by no one
Fosaken...by all
It is waiting....for all.....to arrive
But no one ever makes it alive...

Chorus-
A river of souls sourounds the land
Lost they are crying to understand

v2
There is a castle
Wonder of worlds
Built out of gold bricks and the tears of men
It sits in the middle
No one knows what lies in it
Untold treasure or the ruler of this land?
No one has ever seen
Not once in this world, its elusive king

Chorus-
A kingdom.....without a king....
A land forsaken......from within

End-
Never stop dreaming
Never lose faith, dont stop believing
Ill see you in this dreamy land, so suddenly
Till then, adieu mon ami



FYI - I'm aetheist, so I got some weird comments last time I posted this

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Mystery

The river Styx

V1-
Look through this mirror, what do you see
Behind you a world of solitude and greed
Do you see within you, the faith that we need
Can you reach out and touch it
Can you breath it, and see

Look through this mirror, a calendar of lost hope
Find what was once lost,
And give it a name
And set it before you, conquer the greed
Set forth to purge, let the infidel bleed

Chorus-
Believe we can change
Believe we can save
Believe this curse can be lifted
Believe till the end of our days
Walk blind, deaf and dumb around the river Styx
And all will know, this is a man who believed

V2
A mist clouded vision, a forsaken utopia
Born into exile, never to be seen
What has this come to, what has this been
Escalating upwards, merciless sky’s
Storm doth brew my brothers

Look through the mist, a portrait of lost souls
Find what was once lost
And give it a hope
Forget not your purpose, forget the untrue
This life is unforgiving, lets help each other get through

Chorus rep.

End-
I will walk around the river Styx,
Blind, deaf and dumb
And all will stare and point fingers
I believed, and my soul eternally lingers




If you walked around Blind deaf and dumb in styx, it means whoever killed you blinded you, cut your tongue and ears off after you died.

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Mystery

Born from my tears,
Made of hollow reflections of my words
Spoken but never spoken for
So complete, but so obsolete
Such a beautiful creation on the outside
But we all know its missing something on the inside

Chorus-
So beautiful, but so hollow
So elegant, yet so shallow
Have I made a monster?
Preach redemption
Breach the deception
So disillusioned yet no answer

V2
Someone else’s words
Something inexpressible elseway
Creation, but never created by
So inspiring, still no desiring
How can something like this go wrong
How can what I put on the inside be gone

Chorus rep.

End-
And I see now
Something I could not forsee now
IF I had known before
I could have changed things before
No clairvoyance to help me
So I guess im stuck with this….
I wouldn’t change it…ever..

Last one for now.

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