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Old 05-06-2006, 08:51 PM   #1
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Question Lost Love
Verse 1:

You haven’t left yet,
But I miss you.
What will happen,
When you do?

What will happen,
If you leave,
And I never get to say,
What you mean to me?

Chorus:
I love you,
More than words can say,
And it’s hard to let you go.

Bridge:
What would you say,
If I told you that?
What would you say,
If I let you know,
What you mean to me?

Verse 2:
You’re my good friend as life’s billow toss,
You’re true as the ocean is blue,
If your loss seems deeper than mine,
I say think again

Chorus:
I love you,
More than words can say,
And it’s hard to let you go.

Verse 3:
Don’t think,
I don’t mean love like a valentine.
Don’t blink,
Don’t let this moment pass us by.

Tag:
I took a chance,
And now it’s your turn.
Just don’t tell me,
You don’t love me in return.

Chorus:
I love you,
More than words can say,
And it’s hard to let you go.

Verse 4:
You’re so much wiser than I,
To keep silent about your feelings.
But I wonder why,
You won’t share yours with me.

Could it be,
You don’t love me at all?

Do you like it?
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Old 05-06-2006, 10:15 PM   #2
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I liked it alot, perhpas because I feel similar.
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Old 07-06-2006, 02:31 PM   #3
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Thanks. I like knowing I'm not alone.
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Old 07-06-2006, 02:48 PM   #4
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nicely done. I'm sure alot of people can relate to this, including me
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Old 07-06-2006, 03:51 PM   #5
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How constructive can I get with what I'm going to say...

NOT VERY!

Too cliche. Verse 2, the best verse. Lacked visual. Way too outgoing with emotion (needs more metaphors).

OK

/10

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Old 07-06-2006, 04:14 PM   #6
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How constructive can I get with what I'm going to say...

NOT VERY!

Too cliche. Verse 2, the best verse. Lacked visual. Way too outgoing with emotion (needs more metaphors).

OK

/10

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The reason I will never give you a 10 is because you dont understand music and emotion. Their two different things, stop confusing them.
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Old 07-06-2006, 05:13 PM   #7
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The reason I will never give you a 10 is because you dont understand music and emotion. Their two different things, stop confusing them.
Thank god someone finally told him
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Old 07-06-2006, 06:05 PM   #8
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I feel so underminded (kinda the point right?)...

You guys are right. But saying shit like won't (and never will) change my aspect on how lyrics should be. And all I could say is:
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I'm going to say a bad word on this spoiler
(yes, I had to get hostile)

(Don't tell me what I know of music. Last I check that was up to me)


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Thank god someone finally told him
You guys should know by now is that you can tell me anything. It only makes it worse if you hold your thoughts inside.

Now, I'm not doing this again.

For now on, I'm going to shut up on lyrics. I'm just not doing this crap anymore.

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edit:I'll just be a prick in poetry XD
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Old 07-06-2006, 06:10 PM   #9
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Old 07-06-2006, 06:27 PM   #10
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Jazz? That's why my dad used to play until the fart died on us. Now it's obsolete in my head.

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No, you dont understand emotion and music, stop pretending you do hypocrite.
You're absolutely right, Mystery. I don't. That's why I waste my time listening to you pretend to know. You fucking prick. I never messed with you, dip-shit. I could. And If I loss, who gives. Fucking jazz-punk. Continue posting your knowledge.

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Old 07-06-2006, 06:34 PM   #11
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Well, since I saw Elpisis' post, I deiced to throw this in: you're right. That's how I saw it. Stupid me.

I'm i won't be fucking off anytime soon. Sorry, 'bout that.
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