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Old 05-06-2006, 01:08 AM   #31
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I don’t think my language matters in this post, I mean, who’s gonna care about what I say after they read the first rap?
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I don’t think my language matters in this post, I mean, who’s gonna care about what I say after they read the first rap?
I didnt believe there could be a pearson so deeply involved with backwards logic that even after having rules and regulations hammered into them they dont get it.
If thamior is posting about it, don't you think he cares? OH! but your 13 I forgot, you can't think past this instant.

Two wrongs dont make one right kiddie, neither do they make you smart tough or hard, in a real fight you would shut up because the result of your mouth opening would be you getting your ass kicked.
Now, you can either leave peacefully and not attempt to piss me off, or you can come back with another rude, ignorant comment and get your ass handed to you.

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haha i wish i was 13 again. then i would just start all over
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I didnt believe there could be a pearson so deeply involved with backwards logic that even after having rules and regulations hammered into them they dont get it.
If thamior is posting about it, don't you think he cares? OH! but your 13 I forgot, you can't think past this instant.

Two wrongs dont make one right kiddie, neither do they make you smart tough or hard, in a real fight you would shut up because the result of your mouth opening would be you getting your ass kicked.
Now, you can either leave peacefully and not attempt to piss me off, or you can come back with another rude, ignorant comment and get your ass handed to you.

Your choice.
ok first off, dont talk to me like i am 13.
secondly, why is everyone pissing me off, i was just giving that smart ass rapper a taste of his own medicine. plus, i hate rap, all you gotta do is
rhyme bad, dress like you had your eyes shut when you brought your damn clothes, disrespect woman, swear repeatedly and get away with it.
Thirdly, what the hells your problem, I don’t even no most of you and you are being rude. You can call me ignorant if you like, but you’re the ones targeting me just because you know if you said the same thing to the Jesus strangler he would dish it back.
So why don’t you fuck off and mind your own business because you are really pissing me off. That god damn rap was just a joke and is was not half as violent or rude as tjs’s was.
Oh, and I’m bad at typing so I get heaps off typos? So??? Why do you all have to keep reminding me?!?
I write because it make me happy, not to wow you with my la dee da grammar skills. So why do you have to take that away from me?? One of the few things that make me happy in life and you have completely smashed me to pieces. Well, well fucking done. I’m happy for you. I’m leaving the writing forums for ever, and I will probably never write again now that you have made me realize I suck at it. Why don’t I just kill myself? Would that make you happy? Well that’s my problem. I’m always trying to make other people happy and never myself. Death would make me happy. I wouldn’t have to see myself ever again. Well I’m going to have a bottle of Champaign, or make that a couple.
Later fuckers.
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ok first off, dont talk to me like i am 13.
secondly, why is everyone pissing me off, i was just giving that smart ass rapper a taste of his own medicine. plus, i hate rap, all you gotta do is
rhyme bad, dress like you had your eyes shut when you brought your damn clothes, disrespect woman, swear repeatedly and get away with it.
Thirdly, what the hells your problem, I don’t even no most of you and you are being rude. You can call me ignorant if you like, but you’re the ones targeting me just because you know if you said the same thing to the Jesus strangler he would dish it back.
So why don’t you fuck off and mind your own business because you are really pissing me off. That god damn rap was just a joke and is was not half as violent or rude as tjs’s was.
Oh, and I’m bad at typing so I get heaps off typos? So??? Why do you all have to keep reminding me?!?
I write because it make me happy, not to wow you with my la dee da grammar skills. So why do you have to take that away from me?? One of the few things that make me happy in life and you have completely smashed me to pieces. Well, well fucking done. I’m happy for you. I’m leaving the writing forums for ever, and I will probably never write again now that you have made me realize I suck at it. Why don’t I just kill myself? Would that make you happy? Well that’s my problem. I’m always trying to make other people happy and never myself. Death would make me happy. I wouldn’t have to see myself ever again. Well I’m going to have a bottle of Champaign, or make that a couple.
Later fuckers.
heh, well if you continue at what your saying then writingforums never needed you. I dont believe that Jesus Strangelers rap was good, I thought it was sick and crude, I said so. I believe in having fun, I belive in criticism. But the constant swearing, and the offensive messages are getting to me. I havent once tried to be rude, I only asked that you stop certain behaviors. I never even said that you were bad at writing, I know your rap was a joke and thats why I didnt comment on it. Anyways, you say your not a kid, but it would be nice if you matured a little and realized that the world isnt out to get you.
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Jesus did I write that?!?

Man I must of been drunk last night.
No offence
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Jesus did I write that?!?

Man I must of been drunk last night.
No offence
thats why you dont get drunk
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Old 05-06-2006, 10:54 PM   #38
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true that

anyway, i was just being a drama queen.
never take anything i say to seriously
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Old 05-06-2006, 10:57 PM   #39
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anyway, i was just being a drama queen.
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its too seriously, lol, no well as long as its not offensive I wont.
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Somehow this rap wasn't quite in-your-face enough to scream the words SATIRE in my face... but I'm desperately hoping that's what it was.
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Old 05-06-2006, 11:11 PM   #41
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Computers stuff me up, I’m such a slow typist writing my hand is much easier for me
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Old 05-06-2006, 11:17 PM   #42
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as it is for most of us
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Jesus did I write that?!?

Man I must of been drunk last night.
No offence
You have managed to avoid my wrath this time since I wasnt able to responde before you apology, and im not thejesusstrangler.

And FYI, you are treated how you act.
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as long as it stays that way, but it would be nice to tone your language down a bit, you do have youngsters running around on here. I know for a fact a 13 year old that browses lyrics. If this were a forum for purely mature people I wouldnt care (even if it was a tad offensive) but its not, thats the only thing I really have a problem with.
I hope this wasn't about me.... Positive it is. You're absolutely right! MY VIRGIN EARS/EYES! Haha, that's really nothing. I hang around with more 16-18 year-olds than 13-14 year olds. So, um, yeah.

PS: I stil thought this was funny and is one of the reasons rap today is hated.

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I have no issue with language. I doubt there are many 13 year olds that haven't heard the words.

My issue is with the piece itself - rap-lite written, I'm sure, by a middle-class white boy looking to shock. *Yawn*. It's just plain bad. There's a term in the UK (don't know if it's made it to the states) that encapsulates what this is about: Wigga. (=white nigga = white gangsta wannabe).
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