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03-09-2006, 02:50 PM
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Wordsmith
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Take Me Simple
Author's Note:
Been awhile since I posted lyrics. Here's what I'm working on
Last edited by Oasis Writer : 03-10-2006 at 01:14 PM.
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03-09-2006, 07:45 PM
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Prolific Writer
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It's nice Oasis. One thing I was wondering about was this part.
Can I saw I love you,
Maybe it does make sense and I just can't see it. lol. Well like I said, I like it.
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Yesterday we shook hands, my friend
Today a moonbeam lightens my path
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03-09-2006, 07:46 PM
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Wordsmith
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lol - yeah, typing error. I've been tired this past week, so thank you very much. No excuse. Thank you very much for your kind words.
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03-10-2006, 10:27 AM
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Very musical.
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03-10-2006, 12:55 PM
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Wordsmith
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Thank you  |
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03-10-2006, 01:11 PM
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very pretty, I like it a lot! the chorus flows nicely...when I read lyrics I always wonder what they would sound like with music. I could imagin a nice accoustic background to this.
Is that supposed to be "it"?
Alice
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03-10-2006, 01:15 PM
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Wordsmith
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Thank you Alice for the nice words and help. I really appreciate it a lot. I actually fixed that mistake once but I must of not saved it on here or something. Oh well, it's fixed now. Thank you a lot.
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03-10-2006, 01:28 PM
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Ink Slinger
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your welcome ^^ I'm glad I'm appreciated! yay appreciation!
Alice
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03-10-2006, 01:45 PM
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Wordsmith
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lol - your words are always appreciated from me, so keep the smile. Thank you once again.
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06-30-2006, 09:16 PM
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Sweeter than I'm used from you...but...okay |
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06-30-2006, 09:19 PM
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Wordsmith
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