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03-01-2006, 02:44 PM
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Wordsmith
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: Sailing the darkness of the Cosmos with this planet as my vessel
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Lost Friend (Will Never Be the Same)
Author's Note:
Just write it up, may not be that awesome, but I'm working on it. Thank you.
In the run of all the fun
Laughing at all of the puns
Nothing would ever
Nothing could ever
Leaning on that friend of mine
Who just sniffed six lines
Nothing would ever
Nothing could ever
(Held Notes, Chorus)
Be the same
Be
The same
Again
When you see that friend
Holding on to the end
Dying to have a friend
That cares
Like I
Care
Like I
Care
(End Chorus)
Hoping to pull them through
Doing whatever you could do
Nothing will be the same
Nothing will be the same
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03-01-2006, 03:07 PM
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Prolific Writer
Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 386
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You made a pretty complete story there with very few words. I like it. I could feel the beat a little too.
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03-01-2006, 03:28 PM
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Wordsmith
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Thank you Vasque. I apprectiate it a lot. Was aiming for something simple, with something complex behind it. And then when I wrote this....I didn't feel I got that at all. lol. So, thank you.
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03-01-2006, 03:35 PM
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Scribe
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: not quite sure, but i'm surrounded by blazing fire and i was a bad girl in that last life...
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Oasis, you've done it again: captured something so complex with such few words. This time, though, it went to the point that I could hear the rhythm behind it, and it would be interesting to see what type of music you have set to it.
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03-01-2006, 03:42 PM
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Wordsmith
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Thank you Rose, you as well have blessed me with your grace and most kind words. I really do appreciate it. Thank you very much.
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03-01-2006, 04:38 PM
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Scribe
Join Date: Oct 2005
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awsome job what does it sound like
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An' he just smoked my eyelids
An' punched my cigarette.
Oh, Mama, can this really be the end,
To be stuck inside of Mobile
With the Memphis blues again.
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03-01-2006, 06:36 PM
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Wordsmith
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Hard to test that, I don't have it recorded yet. I'm thinking alternative/punk.
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03-02-2006, 08:04 AM
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Addict
Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: France
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The power of words...
I really like it. I'm looking forward for some more lyrics ! ^^
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03-02-2006, 09:00 AM
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Wordsmith
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Hey, thank you a lot. I really appreciate it. I got a lot of lyric on here already. 11 or more. Some are just hidden from long ago. But thanks.
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03-04-2006, 01:16 AM
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Adept Writer
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Oregon
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I'm thinking it could be a great opera song. The song seems a bit short....but it's straight to the point. Good form and straight forward. Didn't use the same words over and over and over and...you get the point.
I'm gonna have to say I like this one....
Good Job there Oasis.
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03-04-2006, 01:17 AM
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Wordsmith
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Hey, thank you Blackhawk, I really appreciate the comments. Thank you
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