babbie

hope is what i have when with you
hope is your warm smile
hope is your embraces
hope is what you've given me

hope is so clear
you've given me this
i could have never had hope if not for you
i would still be alone without it

hope is seeing you everyday
hope is you being my best friend
hope is being able to talk to you
hope is living everyday for you

hope is so clear
you've given me this
i could never had hope if not for you
i would still be alone without it

so when someone asks what hope is i'll say
hope is my bestfriend
hope is her hugging me close
hope is having a shoulder to cry on

hope is so clear
you've given me this
i could never had hope if not for you
i would still be alone without it

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Vasque

Very nice sentiment, and reads well.... more perhaps as a poem than lyrics. I usually over-rhyme, but seems like a couple more obvious rhymes would add more musical quality to it.

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thamior

I didnt like the repetitive quality, its hard to pull off, I can't do it and so shy away from it, but when done well it is quite nice. Sorry if I keep sounding so critical, I just think there could be alot more in your songs, alot of them, to me, seem to lack the depth that I enjoy, but perhaps im missing something.

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Dark and Shattered Lands

Oasis Writer

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