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Old 02-13-2006, 07:10 PM   #1
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Just Not With You

Just Not With You

Short skirt, push up bra
Lipstick, hairspray
Fishnets and high heels
Got you looking good today

Always could…
Turn any head in the joint
When ya wanted to
But your looks are
No longer the point

Chorus:
Those things you feel
Those things you do
You can hide,
But never conceal
The ugly you,
On the inside

The inside of you.
The things you do
When the makeup comes off
I can see the real you

I need some more lovin
Gotta get something new
But I can’t stay here
Cause I don’t want it,
Not with you

Just not with you,
Not with you
Just not with you

*chorus*

The perfect 10
In the perfect hell
See your forked tail in,
Our bedroom, bedroom cell

I’ll take eternity in this hell
Take it all, take it well

Find some things to do here,
Just not, not with you

*chorus*

The ugly you,
The things you do
Can never hide
The ugly girl,
The inside of you

*chorus*



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Old 02-14-2006, 09:07 PM   #2
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nice write... your words come off really strong
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Old 02-14-2006, 09:17 PM   #3
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Old 02-16-2006, 05:37 PM   #4
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Thanks guys, I 've always liked this one. I especially like the pace it has in the second half. I've been meaning to tweek the top to match it better but never got around to it.
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