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Old 02-08-2006, 08:55 PM   #1
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Song - Wond'ring who we are

These two songs im posting now will be my last for a little while (maybe a week or so) i'm in a bit of a creative slump. I wrote this one, actually almost a moth ago.

Somewhere in betweem,
the gaps within my mind.
I'm slowly losing me,
to problems wrought by time.

I see the hope i've found,
vested in nothing sure.
Bleeding out of the crown,
a victim of the lure.

Chorus:
Dwind'ling in the dark,
wond'ring who we are.
Its just another day,
to pass the time away.

The wasteland of our years,
spent in teenage dark.
We're weighted by our fears,
lit dimly in this spark.

*chorus*

(slower tempo)
And I have a rose to hold me,
containing the priceless love.
She is the dawn of morning,
and I cannot live enough.

*chorus* x2
dwindling in the dark,
but im walking alright,
Wondring who we are,
amid the fading light.
Its just another day,
and I look to the lord,
to pass the time away,
living by the word.
*chorus*
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Old 02-09-2006, 09:34 AM   #2
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Read well, good flow, quite musical. I can see me singing along to it. I missed the point of the story in there, as I didn't get some of the metaphors. You might need to make it a little more obvious for the likes of me.
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Old 02-09-2006, 07:29 PM   #3
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ah, well yea, some personal stuff, the rose is the person whom I love (who does not share in those feelings, though she once did) thats also the She thats mentioned. I dont know what else is vague, you'll have to be more specific.
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