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01-23-2006, 06:19 PM
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Wordsmith
Join Date: Jan 2005
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The Loveless Writings of a Loveless Soul
(Instrumental, slower, simple)
In the blindness of his heart
It appeared
The words that tore him apart
The things he feared
And it hurt his heart
Nothing could have cleared
He wanted to depart
He couldn't have reared
The black art
That couldn't have cheered
His empty heart
From the weird
Emptiness |
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01-23-2006, 08:03 PM
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Writing Machine
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Haha.... this is so poetic, you just got ot love it dearly.... Good one
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01-23-2006, 08:08 PM
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Wordsmith
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Thank you, once again.
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01-24-2006, 04:21 AM
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Wordsmith
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short...short, thats the only thing that irked me...good job though.
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01-24-2006, 08:13 PM
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Wordsmith
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Thanks again. Yeah, I know it's short, but this is...what am I looking for...something of a short sweet loveless loving song that just is behind instrumental sounds. I think is what I was aiming for.
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01-25-2006, 04:07 AM
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Wordsmith
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then you achieved it.....*cough*short*cough*
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01-27-2006, 10:55 PM
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Adept Writer
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I liked it. Short, simple, and to the point. It was well written.
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01-28-2006, 01:44 AM
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Wordsmith
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Thanks BHT
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07-04-2006, 01:15 AM
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Addict
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last one I can get for the night, I'm yawning too bad. Nice instrumental one, cool interlude  *screams as she sleeps away into her abyss* |
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07-04-2006, 11:46 AM
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Wordsmith
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Thanks Ter |
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07-04-2006, 01:34 PM
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Prolific Writer
Join Date: Feb 2006
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nice. just reading it, i can think of some perfect acoustic tunes to put it to
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07-04-2006, 01:35 PM
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Wordsmith
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Ditto with what I was wanting. Metal worked, but then when played, it didn't fit. We could, but accostic is what I want. Thanks  |
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