demon_

Haha, another emo one.... But I was forced to write it, lol. Have fun.


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Fishing For Love



I thought it was it was all in my mind
But my mind, I couldn't get it to shine
I wondered if was only a matter of time
A matter of time. . .

[chorus:]
Randomly I cast my happiness
And everything else on the line
But I never seen my self dieing!
Saw myself dieing!
Fishing for love,
Giving it all, even blood
(Even blood!)

When I got the fish, it got away
It took all my bait, and my happiness today
(Took it all away!)
It took all my faith and puked it all down a drain!
Pulled my plug and it bleed my dry...
I bled dry!

[chorus]

I tried to let the days die
But I feel the urge to waste it all away
I feel addiction growing great
To feel the love I will give up blood!
(Give up blood)

[chorus]x2

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slayerofangels

I had some trouble reading this one. The intent is pretty clear though and it is well-written. Perhaps some tweaking is needed (or I need to fire the guy who tries to sing it in my head ). Thanks for sharing!

Slayer

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demon_

Non, no. You're right; my work is sometimes a bit wordy... I know my rhymes are sometimes vaggue but I try to be creative and I try to sing it in a note where it sort of mixes in with it. I agree. Lol

Demon

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