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01-18-2006, 11:32 PM
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Wordsmith
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: Sailing the darkness of the Cosmos with this planet as my vessel
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Dementia Romantica
I’m losing the fight I’ve lost I had no right Now I’m lost I fought for her None of it seen I’ve lost the battle I’ve set her free I cried my heart out My heart’s scars burning My brain stinging My stomach turning All of them wounds All of them broken Far into the night I cried Cried all my tears away for you You didn’t hear them You couldn’t see I know you felt them But I couldn’t make you believe I’m losing the fight I’ve lost I had no right Now I’ve lost I fought for her None of it seen I’ve lost the battle I’ve set her free I tried my hardest to show you Everything I had to offer I would have I could have Nothing Nothing you would long for I’ve cried this battle three times before I have no more tears to shed Why did I have to fight and endure Love lives hard as if on a thread I’m losing the fight I’ve lost I had no right I’ve lost I fought for you But you couldn’t see I’ve lost you To set you free Tuesdays, I dread I live life as if on a thread This fucking day I'll always have to pay For the pain Like the blood that stains On open wounds Of my heart I’m losing the fight I’ve lost I had no right I’ve lost I fought for you But you couldn’t see You couldn’t see I couldn’t make you believe I’m losing (2x) I’m losing the fight for love I’ve lost it I’m losing the fight for love I’ve lost it It’ll never come back I’m losing the fight for love I’ve lost it I’ve lost you I’ve lost everything just for you I’ve lost love To set you free |
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01-19-2006, 09:47 AM
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Wordsmith
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: wherever I wish it to be
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wow this is long...  , again its one of those songs that needs to be heard in order to judge properly, but it looks sound |
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01-22-2006, 01:43 AM
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Adept Writer
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Oregon
Gender: Male
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Good point to the song..... interesting lyrics.
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01-22-2006, 01:46 AM
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Wordsmith
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: Sailing the darkness of the Cosmos with this planet as my vessel
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Thank you guys, I appreaciate the comments.
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02-17-2006, 12:25 PM
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Scribe
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Boise
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that's sad, i wanna go cry now. lol. good lyrics. would work great in an emo song. SCREAM! lol awesome dude
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02-17-2006, 12:40 PM
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Wordsmith
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Thanks Delta for the nice words. Yeah, this is one of my sadder songs. But I'm not sure I would scream too much in this song. lol. Maybe, I don't know. But thanks for the feedback.
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04-11-2006, 02:57 PM
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Scribe
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Nampa Idaho
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So sad, you write a lot of sad songs, but this one is very great.
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04-11-2006, 03:03 PM
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Wordsmith
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This is actually one of my favorites. This, Nightmares, and Razor Blades are my favorite I've written. Thank you, very much so.  |
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04-19-2006, 10:30 PM
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Wordsmith
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Okay....thank you I guess???
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04-24-2006, 03:09 PM
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Scribe
Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: In The shadows
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I was actually singing it as I read it. yelling and going slow at some points
I liked it 10 outta 10
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04-24-2006, 03:14 PM
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Wordsmith
Join Date: Jan 2005
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This is actually my favorite, thank you very much, I'm very glad you liked it, and even more joyed that you gave me a 10 outta 10. Thank you so much |
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04-25-2006, 04:57 PM
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Addict
Join Date: Apr 2006
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hey, very good song...I printed it off today and read it over a few times, and I think I've finally realized what its supposed to be about, and if it is, then.....yeah...I'm gonna feel really bad, but yeah..its really good though |
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04-25-2006, 05:22 PM
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Wordsmith
Join Date: Jan 2005
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It's okay, don't worry about it Britt. I'm glad you liked it.
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06-29-2006, 02:06 PM
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Addict
Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: Boise
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Dark stuff  Made me sad, but it's great But sad :'( |
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06-29-2006, 05:35 PM
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Ink Slinger
Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: Carribean
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I'm sorry, nightwish pwn you
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