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01-17-2006, 07:59 PM
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Wordsmith
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: Sailing the darkness of the Cosmos with this planet as my vessel
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Silent Serenity
It’s all behind your eyes It's all behind your eyes Black, red, green, yellow, purple, white, orange, blue Where can we find our own It’s all behind your eyes |
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01-17-2006, 08:06 PM
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Wordsmith
Join Date: Jun 2004
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this is one of those songs that you have to hear in order to judge, I seriosuly cant have a comment without hearing it.
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01-17-2006, 08:33 PM
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Member
Join Date: Jan 2006
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I like it.
I hear the music in my head.
Sell it to Maynard.
<3.
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01-18-2006, 11:11 AM
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Wordsmith
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Hey, thankz guys for the replies. I really appreciate it you guys taking the time to read it. Thank you quarantined and thamior. I got a lot more lyrics, but I'm not sure if I should post them. But yeah, thank you.
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01-18-2006, 06:27 PM
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Wordsmith
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post away, this forum needs more lyricisists (spelled wrong  ). |
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02-17-2006, 12:19 PM
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Scribe
Join Date: Jan 2006
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nice dark lyrics. all gothic/punk. i can hear the screaming in my mind. awesome dude
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02-17-2006, 01:49 PM
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Wordsmith
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lol - More with the screaming. lol - oh well, this one is close to screamo anyways. Thanks for your nice words Delta. I appreciate ya help
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03-23-2006, 11:11 AM
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Prolific Writer
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This lyrics are great and they'd be even better with the music. it has a great rhyme scheme and a good message
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03-23-2006, 11:18 AM
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Wordsmith
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Thank you bambie, once again, for your kind words and for reading through. I appreciate it a lot. Thank you.
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06-30-2006, 09:11 PM
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Addict
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Dmm dmm dmm! A great interlude of darkness  |
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06-30-2006, 09:21 PM
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Wordsmith
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And a thank you for appreciating the darkness  |
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