Mystery

Shaping reality

V1-
It was an ill born lie
A twisted omen
We forgot all before

It was a broken tear
A forgotten whisper
We heed the call

Bridge-
Nothing going right,
Nothing going right now
Nothing going right
Nothing going right no

Chorus-
Shaping reality
With no context
Building on Cause
With no object

Nothings....going....right

V2
We were a newbron horizon
Hopeful Icon
We forgot all before

We were taken together
worked out better
We heed the call

Chorus rep




Its not really ment to have a point, its ment to make you think what the point is, its like a song I want people to draw their own conclusions about, it sounds twisted and dark with heavy thought and thats what I want, to get people thinking "what the hell was going through his mind"

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Mystery

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Common!

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This isn't as good as your other lyrics. I can't seem to pinpoint what’s wrong with it; it just feels a little bland to me. It’s missing that 'wow' factor.

You’re other lyrics seem to have very interesting views and you have really good always of making them come across and stand out, so we can see you point that your making. This song I feel is missing that, and it kind of makes the song seem dead... if that makes sense.

It’s always good to make the reader work, to try and figure out hidden meanings - which you often do in your lyrics – but with this song I feel there is a little distance, it’s had to explain…

What I made of the song was that something bad happened at the start of something be it birth or another event, then I got a feeling that somehow things were worked out and things were going fine but then it turned sour. There a lot of blanks that need to be filled such as what’s not going right, how did it all start etc. etc. That’s what I felt from the song, could be completely wrong from your original idea.

Panda.

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