Writers Forum - WritingForums.com Home Rules FAQ Members Groups Calendar Gallery Search
» Sign Up «

Welcome to Writing Forums, one of the fastest growing writing communties on the web.

You are currently viewing our boards as a guest which gives you limited access to view most discussions, articles and photo galleries. By joining our free community you will be able to talk with other writers, get feedback on your work to improve your writing skills, discuss ideas, share tips & tricks, network and make friends!

Registration is fast, simple and absolutely free so please, join our community today!

If you have any problems with the registration process or your account login, please contact support.
  Search Forums
Lit.Org - Bootcamp for writers. Post your work and other writers review it, it's that easy.

Advanced Search



Go Back   Writers Forum - WritingForums.com > Creativity > Lyrics
Register FAQ Members List Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Lyrics Original Song Lyrics.

Reply
 
Thread Tools
Old 08-08-2005, 09:45 PM   #1
Member
 
Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: scotland
Posts: 5
Junkie
Send a message via Yahoo to Junkie
Gone

Look at me, am I not worth it?
Abandon me, because I'm worthless.
You scream at me like you're the victim here.
The ashes scattered, the view no longer clear.

Beg to me, whisper sweet suicide.
When I adhere, see the joy in your eyes.
I relieve the pain, with poison in my veins.
I mask the scars of my life torn apart.

I was restless, tried to get to you.
No cash, no ticket but I was feeling blue.
Got arrested, the police called your phone.
Said theres no space, told them send her home.

*thats all I've got so far - how is it?*
__________________
I don't think you trust in my self righteous suicide - I cry - when angels deserve to die!
Junkie is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-09-2005, 12:45 AM   #2
Ink Slinger
 
Cold Twilight's Avatar
 
Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: America...
Gender: Female
Posts: 3,724
Cold Twilight is an unknown quantity at this point
All I can say is...I really, really like the lyrics, but Ohhh that H_U_R_T_S!!! That is some serious pain there. Memories are not individual...I sympathize with the person speaking. Sorry if I offend, but it really rang a resonance with my memories... There is hope for us...I promise. :
__________________
If anyone critiqued, and I didn't return it, please let me know!
Poetry: Armageddon, Haunt Fox, Debonair Stranger, Riddle In Red, I Walk In Shadow

lol. Help a newly hungry werewolf anyone? http://world5.monstersgame.co.uk/?ac=vid&vid=59161464
How about becoming a Knight?http://world4.knightfight.co.uk/?ac=vid&vid=96062742
Cold Twilight is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-09-2005, 03:55 PM   #3
Member
 
Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: scotland
Posts: 5
Junkie
Send a message via Yahoo to Junkie
thank you!

Yeah this song is still being finished - it was about some tough times I had being homeless and theres alot of anger in there but writing has helped me to release most of that anger and I plan on setting up a band within the next year! Thanks for the nice comment and - no I'm not offended, I'm very flattered.
__________________
I don't think you trust in my self righteous suicide - I cry - when angels deserve to die!
Junkie is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply


Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 
Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are Off
Pingbacks are Off
Refbacks are Off


All times are GMT -5. The time now is 02:25 PM.
Powered by vBulletin, Copyright ©2000-2007, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
LinkBacks Enabled by vBSEO 3.1.0


 
You are NOT Logged In.
User Name:

Password



Newsletter

Subscribe to Majestic
the official newsletter of Writing Forums and lit.org
Email:


Related Links

Link to Us:
Writing Forums - Discussions for Writers