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Old 08-07-2005, 09:11 PM   #1
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I love you, I hate you

This is a song I composed for my Alice book. I really like the tune of it, and my friend is going to sing the vocals one day (she has a REALLY good voice)

Enjoy!

I love you
Take back those empty words
How could you be so cruel?
Only to hurt me....

I hate you
Did I really make you cry?
Did sour tears form in your eyes?
Over one worthless life...

Chorus:

It doesn't matter anymore
I've disappeared, I'm gone for good
I love you...I hate you...
Look at this hell that I have made
I wish I could make it go away
Release me....Forgive me...

Oooooooh (X2)

2nd Verse:

I'm angry
You should have tried to understand
You never were my parents, sister, friend....
Just a cold stranger...

I'm confused...
Maybe I'm the real one to blame
Or maybe I have just gone insane...
Either way, it doesn't change a damn thing...

REPEAT CHORUS

Bridge

(Ooooooooooooh x4) in the background

I open my mouth
But I can't hear my own words
Listen to my screaming and crying
Forget me. (Forgive me, please)

I cannot hear
My own lies and my own truths
Speak to me and let me
Rest my bones.
Rest my soul...

(pause)

REPEAT CHORUS UNTIL END.

If I ever get a sound clip, I'll post it for all of you guys to hear!

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Old 08-08-2005, 01:18 AM   #2
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Old 08-09-2005, 12:12 AM   #3
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Perhaps it's just the way the person is supposed to sing it. Not everything rhymes -- it's not supposed to. Maybe I should just wait til I get a sound clip :/ I guess it just sounds better in my head

Thanks for the comment anyway though.
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