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Old 07-29-2005, 04:12 PM   #1
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Falling

You glance my way
But I don't know what to say
I'm drowning in your eyes
You see through my disguise
Everytime I look at you
I feel the truth seeping through

[Chorus]
I'm falling into an ocean of dreams
I'm falling where nothing's what it seems
I'm trying to hide it
I can't deny it
I'm falling in love with you

Now you know just how I feel
Something tells me this is real
And there's nothing I can do
When I close my eyes I see you

[Chorus x2]
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Old 07-29-2005, 05:37 PM   #2
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Beautiful! once again. It got me thinking of my neighbor again. I guess that that things you writes makes me that way or something. It was kind of short though.
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Old 07-29-2005, 07:51 PM   #3
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I like that and I think it could be preformed in many different styles.

Personally I'd like an Indie version of it.
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Old 08-01-2005, 02:36 AM   #4
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I agree it's too short. I'd like to see another verse.

It's very catchy though, and it appeals on a universal level.

Good job.
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Old 08-01-2005, 07:45 AM   #5
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Actually, I can't take credit for this song. My friend wrote this, but she was afraid to post it, so I did it for her!
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