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Old 06-28-2005, 09:02 PM   #1
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trusting pig

what do you think of it?


trusting pig
your broken, innocent heart
as I watch you crumble
can't let her go

from pig to hog
there's nothing left
a cabinet of bourbon
a temper to match

after all you'd been through
she broke you
without a glance behind her back...

fancy that...

jazz

poor pig indulges
all but his true love
no inkling hollywood
sinister storylines

pig was a dreamer
that time has ended
TV for apathy
apathy to forget

no one pities pig
no one feels pig's pain
no recovery opportunities...

fancy that

after all you'd been through
she broke you
without a glance behind her back

fancy that...

jazz...

yeah fancy that
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Old 07-05-2005, 02:46 PM   #2
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Interesting. Sounds like someone who got suckered into a relationship then just pushed away when things were obviously not meant to be. I enjoyed viewing this piece of work. It's an interesting way to put things...the guy being a trusting pig. Nice job here.

Chris
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