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It's Over

I'm feeling wicked inside my mind
All the shit stirring up and suckin me dry
What must have I done in my past life
To be dealt this shit hand this time
To know you controlled me must've been bliss
But let me tell ya bitch I'm pissed and sick of it
I try and try and try my best to resist
But I keep gettin sucked in
I keep gettin sucked in

You bitch
Enough
Of this shit
I'm done
Can't wait
'Til the day
When karma arrives
And I'll be first in line
With my finger raised
Sayin goodbye

It's over


Everyday I make the same mistakes
Pickin up the phone and acting all fake
Listen how many drugs did you take
Cause I took more and you're the one acting crazy
Gettin you outta my head use to be war
But it's startin to get easier than ever before
I've realised you have nothing pure in your core
And most certainly not clean you fucking whore
To know you controlled me must've been bliss
But let me tell ya bitch I'm pissed and sick of it
I try and try and try my best to resist
But I keep gettin sucked in
I keep gettin sucked in

You bitch
Enough
Fuck your shit
I'm done
Can't wait
'Til the day
When karma arrives
And I'll be first in line
With my finger raised
Sayin goodbye

It's Over
goodbye
Forever
no lie

I wanted to be the one
The one who'd die for you
The one who would rid you of your pain
But you put me down and out
Never let me get through
This pain remained the same with each passing day

You bitch
Enough
Fuck all of it
I'm done
Can't wait
'Til the day
When karma arrives
And I'll be first in line
With my finger raised
Sayin goodbye

It's Over
goodbye
Forever
no lie
It's over
I'm satisfied
I will not roll over
For you anymore
Goodbye

__________________
Freedom lies
In a state of mind
That can only rely
On its self
~S.P.I.N

Verago

I love it. If you can sing, go on tour with this, I really like it.
My post is Over.

Mystery

I wouldnt listen to it, why? ITs depressing and i dont want to have "shit" drilled into my head, update your explicit volcabulary, there are more words t.t

__________________
Imagine what you could do if you didn't require sleep... Now calculate all the hours you've lost so far with sleep, Insomnia ain't seeming so bad now is it?

Verago

Yeah. But a lot of people like this kind of stuff to rock music...can't say I'm one of 'em. But I think it would do well.

teflon

Taken in as lyrics, it drones, it goes flat very soon. But unique music always carries ordinary-sounding lyrics. Maybe this is just the case. The music is waiting in the wings.

Mystery

Verago, no, NO rock listener wants to hear constant swearing, some stupid band tried to do that and they got dumped by everyone, rock is different. The only crowd that I could imagine would enjoy this is the rap/hip hop culture.

__________________
Imagine what you could do if you didn't require sleep... Now calculate all the hours you've lost so far with sleep, Insomnia ain't seeming so bad now is it?

Verago

As expressive poetry, it's alright; as a song, it might not be good.