smoking_pot_is_norml

IN ME

Wanting
Stop Taunting
Spirit soul haunting
Inside me
You're lauging
I see it
Remove oneself from it
Just like me

Take all that you need
Don't be blind to what you can see
In fear one time
In me

HUnger
Its burning
Absurd ending
What's it mean?
Sleeping
Awaken
The deep peace is breaking
Inside me

Torment
Don't want it
Acting pyscotic
I've changed
Smiling
Then frowning
The guilt falls upon me
Just the same as yesterday

I'm making a connection
That the state of my direction
Is a little misguided
But I've never tried to hide it
In my mind is the answer
Cursing me like cancer
I don't need to live in fear
I don't need to live here

Take all that you need
Don't be blind to what you can see
In fear one time
In me

Cracking
You are!
I can see you from a far
Hurting
Listen
To me!
Opressed and unfree
Just like me

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Freedom lies
In a state of mind
That can only rely
On its self
~S.P.I.N

save-the-panda's

Not really sure what to make of it. You have lots of emotion in there, but i can't pin point where the emotion is coming from... if you get my drift.

Hope this helps.

Panda.

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~~Panda~~

smoking_pot_is_norml

With this piece, it's just.....what the person who is reading it, makes of it. It's simply what it is and that's it.

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Freedom lies
In a state of mind
That can only rely
On its self
~S.P.I.N

Verago

This coming from someone who thinks 'smoking pot is 'norml''?

I thought it was alright.

Saturnal

This is excellent. I like songs that can take on many meanings. Nice.

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him from the city,
so him gotta be witty