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Old 06-03-2005, 07:44 PM   #1
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Why dont you want me?

V1
I woke up this morning
and went for a run
within the basking sun
I came across you
with another girl.

Chorus
What is so wrong with me?
why don’t you want me?
I thought that you loved me
I must have been mistaken

V2
I’m lying here on my bed
eating chocolate
my eyes are black
from running mascara
i’m starring at your picture
that’s hanging on my wall.

Chorus

V3
I should have known you and me
were too good to be true
everyone said that we wouldn’t last
but thanks to you
they’ve been proven right.

Chorus
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Old 06-03-2005, 08:09 PM   #2
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You write songs aswell now Taz?
ya so cute.
lol.
good job.
i couldnt have done better.
*starts singing your song*
5 stars!
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Old 06-05-2005, 01:53 AM   #3
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not an orignal idea in this entire song.makes it boring all been said before. maybe take it from another point of view, an outsider, or him.... the my bf/gf is cheating on me i thought you loved me concept done at least a million times.
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