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Old 05-31-2005, 09:49 AM   #1
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Reilly Hall
Open Mind

Wanting, waiting for a light to take me
Up and away and out from beyond myself
Lay me down my anticipation
Or find me permanently unwell

Who are you to laugh at me?
Who are you when I see nothing?
Look at you with scabs on your knees
Open your mind, breathe in eternity

Watching, haunting, your ghost hidden inside
Help me, to get free
The devils that reside inside
Bleak, tireless and empty

You’re blind to what’s right in front of your face
Unaware of the forces that share this place
Rise from the ground, take to the sky
The rules of the ground have all been a lie

Have you seen the target on your mind?
The sins confessed but not left behind
Wait to be judged, you’re next in line
Away with your mask of mocking design
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Old 05-31-2005, 10:10 AM   #2
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Another good one! It could be a bit longer, to make your point much clearer.

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