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Old 05-29-2005, 11:49 PM   #1
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The hammer pulls back
The drama starts up
My problems are put to the side now
I need to find the controller of this revolver
It’s in her hand in her mind to pull the trigger
Let my world come falling down
I finished my puzzle not to long before I met her
Now the puzzle starts to show its pieces
When I knew it was a rebound relationship
She’s got the crosshairs on my heart
With this I will turn black
Light will never enter where it was once was

Pull the trigger get it over quick
I got everything I would like
Pull the trigger quick
So I don’t loose anymore time
Pull the trigger

Pull the trigger now
To see a world crumble round someone
Effecting my mentality
Never seen the real reality
But it will pass
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Old 05-30-2005, 08:34 AM   #2
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what genre of music are these lyrics?
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Old 05-30-2005, 08:58 AM   #3
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I dont beleive any point is reached in the song, you have a focus and stay around it but you just repeat it...i'd like to see it continue some more....
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Old 05-31-2005, 09:33 AM   #4
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I agree with Thamior.
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