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Old 05-27-2005, 05:46 AM   #1
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song - what life is about

Can't you take the hand you've been delt,
Time has given so much to you.
Don't you think others have felt,
the same problems you now do.
Life's a path of many choices,
a vice of inconsistency.

Chorus:
There's more than one road you can take,
more than a solitary avenue.
Life is only what you make,
and the choice is up to you.

Its like water flowing away,
dont miss out on the next train.
Whats here may only last today,
there's pleasure in every drop of rain.
And its all one metaphor,
for the most common thing.

*chorus*

Bridge:
Its a gift,
given unto you.
Don't forget,
what was left as true.
Its a treasure,
that cannot be priced.
and i'm sure,
that its alright.

Don't let life's troubles bring you down,
though its a windy hurricane.
Life may toss you hard around,
but you can find strength in every pain.
and though it may be weary,
there's pleasure in everything.

*chorus*

last:
you may find happiness,
whee you least expect it.
and through your struggles,
you grow stronger in every hit.
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Old 05-27-2005, 12:39 PM   #2
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I like it. Good structure and everything.
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Old 05-27-2005, 07:01 PM   #3
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I like it. Good structure and everything.
thanks, I cant wait to post my next song because it kinda goes beyond normal structure but its so damn long...lol I think i'll post it later tonight.
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