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Old 04-27-2005, 03:52 PM   #1
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Rebecca
LipRing

This is from a musical a friend and I are sort of writing. The working title is Rebel.Rebel, it's a satire of high school this is a ballad from the "poor little rich girl" character.




You charmed me
In black converse all-stars
Talking about Chomsky and Luis Bunuel
You asked me what I thought
And that shocked me
I didn’t think
just ogled your lip ring

And I want to hear your thoughts on Camus
And I want to count every freckle in your eyes
And I want to time my life by your heartbeat
Give me a sign, doesn’t have to be a big thing
I just want to get closer to your lip ring

You smell like
pot and patchouli
I think existensialism is really hot
You could drive me home
parents wouldn’t like it
My father says
You’ve been to juvie

But I want to hear your thoughts on Camus
And I want to count every freckle in your eyes
And I want to time my life by your heartbeat
Give me a sign, doesn’t have to be a big thing
I just want to get closer to your lip ring

Just try me
‘cuz I’m not just a good girl
my daddy’s money could buy lots of smack
at my all girls’ school
they taught Latin
You might say I’m
a cunning linguist
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Old 04-27-2005, 09:28 PM   #2
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Hehe, I enjoyed this. I can see this working really well in a similar style to 'Chicago'.

One thing, however:

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I want to count every freckle in your eyes
wha??? *stares in mirror* freckles???
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Old 04-28-2005, 06:12 AM   #3
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sonic aquatic
teehhe. True cool, my friend.
The last verse tops it.
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