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Old 04-22-2005, 06:38 PM   #1
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stay asleep

you awoke from far away
in peace in dreams
one's that'll keep you away
from here a little longer

dreams can make much more sense
than a world that trains old dogs
way too many new tricks

so stay asleep here
a little longer

maybe we'll disapear
dream of ourselves stronger

hit snooze again
never worry again

just stay asleep here
a little longer



the world is ours again
i hope we can still pretend
we're swimming in a pool
of wishes that can always come true,
my clare

stay asleep here
a little longer

maybe we'll disapear
dream of ourselves stronger

let's hit snooze again
and never worry again

just stay asleep here
a little longer
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Old 04-22-2005, 11:35 PM   #2
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I liked it, it was repetitive, but a good use of the repetition.
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