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Office Affair © 2005

Lips painted cherry red
Exchanging looks and smiles
Make-up rubbed off on the bed
Another name added to his files

Writing his name on a note pad
And making excuses to go his way
What a good time they had
But she was just his stray

Chorus
She looked at him, he looked through her
It was just another office affair
Now it’s all a blur

She gazed at him, he looked past her
And she knows he doesn’t care
It was just another office affair

Lips a pale pink
A smile turned upside down
And she finds comfort to think
What goes around comes around

All memory’s thrown in the bin
What a good time they had
Until she found that golden ring
She was just another name to add

Chorus

It was another office affair

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thamior

I liked it alot panda, it was very creative, well written, and it flowed, good job.

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bigm1978

S.T.P.

Good Title. I couldn't wait to see what you had wrote. Good structure, and word usage. I think this subject could have even been more elaborate, and visual. I don't mean dirty detail, but emotionally both his disregard, and her emotions as well. It is just such a good subject with many possibilities I wanted to read more. Anyway well done! keep writing

Mike

save-the-panda's

Thanks for you comments! I'm working on the song, and i will re-post soon

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