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Old 04-17-2005, 03:06 PM   #1
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December 26

Thailand And Malaysia Were Hit
The Planet Is Shaken Oh Dear
But We Never Change Indeed

Pray My Friend To The Highest
To Be Merciful To The Man Of Earth

Prayers Are Needed Everywhere
Wars And Terrorist Attacks
I Don't Know Any More What To Wear
As The Climax Changes So Fast

Pray My Friend To The Highest
To Be Merciful To The Man Of Earth

Dreams I Seen It Materialize
People Running From The Wrath
As Mother Nature Is Convulsing
At The Human Insensitive Attacks

Pray My Friend To The Highest
To Be Merciful To The Man Of Earth

Be Sure The Christ Is Coming Back
Don't Doubt The Father Is Near By
As In Order To Save The Planet
Only The Creator Could Mend It Right

Pray My Friend To The Highest
To Be Merciful To The Man Of Earth

Now Is Not About Destruction
That, We Did Accomplished It Well
We Need To Focus In Construction
Of A Save And Happy Earth

Pray My Friend To The Highest
To Be Merciful To The Man Of Earth
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Old 04-18-2005, 01:05 PM   #2
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terrific... aside a couple lines realllly bothered me... as in these:
"Dreams I Seen It Materialize" the "i seen" is like chewing on tin foil.

"Of A Save And Happy Earth" safe? i dont know about this its a fairly weak way to end an otherwise good song, id come up w/ a more creative final line.... but good job.
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