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Old 04-15-2005, 06:55 PM   #1
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Tender Vittles - It's a Wrap!!
Inspired by my cat Streipsy who loves hip-hop. And Ciara.
I always wanted to write a rap, and I'm really trying to do what Selorian72 said with the CAPS, so bear with me!!!!!!!!!!

My vittles
My vittles
My vittles

TENDER vittles!

water, water, water
feed me

tail shaker
earth quaker


My vittles
My vittles

salty vittles
Kitty Kibbles!

water, water, water
but not a drop to drink

commotion!

Psycho explosion
Plastic bag eruption

Bits of kibbles
kibbles and bits

my vittles are tender
my bits = off limits.

So what of it? These bits?
Do you want an itty bitty bite?

Nibble it - just a little bit!
And you know what else
Yeah what!
Oh yes you do!
Oh yes you DO.

Bingo! Kitty gets it.
Bingo! Kitty gets it.
Bingo! Kitty gets it.
Bingo! Get it done!!
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Old 04-16-2005, 10:29 AM   #2
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is that a commercial jingle...?
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Old 04-17-2005, 07:45 PM   #3
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Awakesome, has the beat of the wrap
thanks for sharing with all

Love and Light
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Old 04-18-2005, 11:58 AM   #4
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WOW!!

Maria - that is great. Really REALLY great! Niiiiice!!

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Dear Audio/s,

Maybe one day!!!

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Old 04-18-2005, 01:07 PM   #6
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is that a commercial jingle...?
i agree. not really a rap... this would be a 10 second rap song you need more lyrics.... in my opinion.
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Old 04-18-2005, 01:35 PM   #7
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Oh RIGHT! I am going to add more to it RIGHT AWAY!! Thanks y'all!!!! You guys are really smart, and NICE because you let me know!!!!!

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