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04-15-2005, 12:30 PM
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Corresponding Doubt
This is a waltz:
I say
I don’t wanna talk to him
With my voice
Because we all know where
That would go
Don’t we?
I don’t think the secret is
Hidden behind
The green door’s passage
Am I right?
Am I?
Wardrobes keep secrets
And faeries wear boots
Don’t pay the FERRYMAN
(the taxman cometh…)
something wicked this way comes
and I need to get rollin’!!
give me what I want and need
it’s simply easier on you
that way
simple.
Is THIS the secret?
The secret is locked away
In the wardrobe.
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04-15-2005, 12:48 PM
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what the.... are these even lyrics?
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04-15-2005, 12:54 PM
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Yeah!
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04-15-2005, 01:01 PM
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lol ok.... i have no idea what this is about.
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04-15-2005, 01:53 PM
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hi
I'm with S.T.P. I don't have any idea what this is about, cause none of it connects. There is no who, why, what , where, that I can make out of it. The title is absent from the body. Maybe you can clear it up. keep writing.
Mike
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04-15-2005, 02:21 PM
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You're with Stone Temple Pilots?????? Wow!!! That kind of makes me sad because then you'd know if my song was good or not. I guess it's BAD then.
I hope to hear more of YOUR music soon. I heard that the singer has a NEW band now, and that they're NOT so good. Are you going to get a NEW singer, TOO???
Can't wait to hear more!!!!!!!
EHH
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04-15-2005, 02:53 PM
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S.T.P is save-the-panda's. The first person who posted to your song.
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04-15-2005, 03:43 PM
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Dear ~VAL,
THANK YOU for clearing that UP!!!!!
I must have looked pretty stupid for a moment there.
FAYE
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04-15-2005, 04:25 PM
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Faye, I really have no idea what to say about the lyrics. They are different. Also, just a suggestion, but you may want to cut the capitalized words spread throughout your post. Capitals are the equivelant to screaming, and I seriously doubt you want people to think your doing that at them.  Also, screaming isn't polite, and most members dislike it a lot.
Cliff
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04-15-2005, 07:02 PM
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Dear Selorian,
Thank you for your suggestion about the CAPS. I have put you in the liner notes of my latest song: "TENDER VITTLES - it's a wrap!" just because of your help!!!
Lovin' it here!!!!!!!
FAYE
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