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Pity Me
By Ellie

I have a story to tell
Listen and you shall
Pity me…
For that is all I want it to be
(I want you to pity me)

(Ohh—oh)
More than once a day..
I used to love you..
I was stupid enough
I thought our love was true-ue—ue…

One more mistake like that and..
By love life will be ruined, then..
One more fault and I will…
Scream..until…

You pity me….

Chorus:

You need to pity me…
Like a blink of an eye, like a flicker of lightning..
You don’t know a thing..
But it just has to be..

You’ve gotta pity me…
Like a leopard crying over its prey..
And then you’ll see…
A heart in me and then you may..

Always pity me..
It just has to be…
I need to be over you..
But I can’t and I speak true…

You better pity me…
I need you to pity me so badly..
I fell in love with you so madly…
But this just had to be…

Oh, please pity me..
Just do it for my plea..
I need you to feel the burn..
I need you to feel my thorn…

That’s in my heart..
I feel apart..
From you..
Do you too?

But you need to pity me..
It just had to be..
You had to be cold..
Wasn’t enough to hold..

Why don’t you have any patience?(Or are you that cold?)
Why don’t you think before you act?(Or was it just as you planned to be?)
Why don’t you..and why didn’t you, just talk it alone?(With me…)
Now I can only moan…

(Back to chorus)

Oh, should I yell?(Repeat)
Or rebel?(Repeat)
Just pity me..(Repeat)
And I’ll spread my wings free…(Repeat)

‘Cuz I want you to pity me…

(Oh—oh..pity me…)

I’ll spread my broken wings..
Forget all those things…
And soon..
I’d be over you..by June...

I have a story to tell
Listen and you shall
Pity me…
For that is all I want it to be

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"My heart beats...while yours heats...with everlasting guilt...on the Earth's tilt...love will never be the same..this is no game..."-E. Blabs

"We may be young, but we're not powerless. We play by their rules long enough and it becomes our game.."-Ender's Game

"He was a soldier, and if anyone had asked him what he wanted to be when he grew up, he wouldn't have known what they meant"-Ender's Game

save-the-panda's

Why on earth would you want someone to pity you? I think that’s the worse emotion any one can show.

I don't think this was one of your best lyrics you have posted on here.

I don't know what to think of the song, I just can't see how any one would want to be pitted.

Panda

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~~Panda~~

thamior

i'm not a very big fan of the content, it screams emo and I dont like that, but I think if you wrote something else I might enjoy it, i'll have to take a look at your other writings when I get a chance.

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Dark and Shattered Lands

damien_frosst

I can almost hear the music. Personally, it's a nice little song. Maybe a heavy overuse of "pity me" but that is the title lyric. I couldn't quite figure out how many of the verses after the "Chorus" bit where the chorus... but guessed it to be just the one.

Given standard emo timing, this song's probably about 8 mintues, eh?

Looks good, make a demo and post that on a link. Would love to actually hear it played.

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Damien

In my world, there are no heroes, only really polite villians.