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Old 04-13-2005, 01:15 AM   #1
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Secretly in love with you(redone)

Secretly In love with you

V1-
There’s something stabbing inside,
Every time,
I talk to you and it hits me like a hammer
I tries to get out, Wont let it escape parol
I’d do anything but let it out for her

Chorus-
You/don’t/know
The demon that’s pulling its way up inside of me
You/don’t/know
The demon escaping from my inner hellfire
You/don’t/know
Its gonna get you in a downward spire
You/don’t/know
When it gets hold of you it wont let you go

V2-
How do I say this, Im in love
Every time,
I look at your eyes
I feel your breath on me
You walk away and I want to cry

Chorus rep

V3-
Its hurting more, the demon
Every time,
It wants to get out so hard, to touch your skin
To look into your eyes
To kiss your lips

Bridge-
I wanna kiss you,
Caress
I wanna feel you,
Undress
I wanna have you
Blessed
I gotta tell you
Loved

Chorus rep

End-
IM NOT TELLING YOU
BUT SECRETLY
Im in love with you…..
Im in love with you….



Redid it, didnt like the last one, I gave more emphasis on wanting her, hating not having her, the "demon" thats killing me inside etc.
Hope you like it better.
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This is definitely much better, a huge improvement. Great song!

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Old 04-13-2005, 12:28 PM   #3
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This is definitely much better, a huge improvement. Great song!

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