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Old 03-20-2005, 10:11 PM   #1
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What if?

Hiding may have been the answer,
What if I'd vanished right from your life?
Would that have ended my strife?

I've told you the truth,
It's right in front of you.
The choice is yours,
It's not gonna hurt anymore.

I've felt pain and grief,
I've felt joy and relief.
There's no going back,
No regrets left to feel.

I've no more hope to break,
No more heart to take.
What you do is yours to decide,
It's just another wave to ride.

My dreams are mine,
There's no changin' that.
What happens is fact,
That's just fine.

Lying may have been the answer,
What if I'd never told you how I felt that day?
Would it settle the debt that I must pay?

My love's too strong,
It can't go wrong.
My heart's still stuck,
But I could care less.
-Piano solo-
I can't stop now...
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Old 03-21-2005, 04:16 AM   #2
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nice I like it, im noticing the whole piano solo thing .
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Old 03-21-2005, 05:20 PM   #3
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I'm sorry...the first lines (in my opinion) are just a tad bland but I LOVE the last stanza or whatever you wanna call it and this would sound great on piano
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