stop - Writers Forum

Mystery · 03-18-2005, 09:19 AM

Stop-

Verse 1,
I opened up my heart for you
I tried to show you that I love you
I tried to be everything I know you want
But you still stay with him

Bridge-
You love another that cant be changed
But when he hurts you don’t come back to me

Chorus-
STOP
Giving me excuses telling me your sorry
STOP
Saying you love another and nothing can change
STOP
Telling me you wish you weren’t the one for me
STOP
When you get bored of him well talk about love
STOP
If you say your falling in love with me then Ill kill you myself
STOP
When he hurts you don’t fucking think to come to me for help

Verse 2,
I let you deep inside of me
I let you take what you see
You know that I’ve been me from the start
But now you wanna puzzle and figure out my heart?

Chorus repeat.

Endverse 3,
I don’t need your
Sorry’s, excuses, declarations, revolutions
Discoveries, statements, propaganda and consiparacies
Just say one thing and strop lying to yourself
You knew I love you long before him
Stop telling me you didn’t, its like a speech you prep
You could have asked me before him
But its always me who’s gotta make the first step

Just generally one thing that pisses me off about girls, is that the guy ALWAYS has to make the first step, even if they know you really love them, they wont even bother asking you or reassuring you, its like you have to suffer anxiety and risk everything while she could just come to you and tell you "i like you" or "i dont", and when you do ask, they'd rather have the guy who asked you to go out cuz he wants your body, instead of the guy who wants you but just couldnt get the courage.
And also this girlie bullshit that "im sorry" or they give you all these excuses, GIRL JUST TELL Me ONE FREAKING PHRASE DONT GIMME THAT CRAP, all i need to hear is "I dont want/cant go out with you"

Shy_Love · 03-18-2005, 12:40 PM

Hmm..that's kind of funny because I just wrote a song about being sorry....to a guy, but my situation is waaaaaaay different. ^_^

Awesome job with the song!!! It's really good.

Mystery · 03-18-2005, 05:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shy_Love

Hmm..that's kind of funny because I just wrote a song about being sorry....to a guy, but my situation is waaaaaaay different. ^_^

Awesome job with the song!!! It's really good.

Your song is why i wrote this....no difference in the situation :/

Shy_Love · 03-18-2005, 06:54 PM

Oh....Hmmm...I still think you're off...by like a lot. If you're talking about my situation, or how the other guy feels. LoL it's an awesome song, but hard protrays to my situation...

LettersToTheBlind · 03-18-2005, 07:29 PM

i think you should check out a song called "stop" by the plain white t's. they're a rock band out of chicago, really nice guys, really great songwriters. the premise you've described seems much different than what they were saying, but i don't know what kind of melody you have in mind so you may want to make sure it's not too similar considering the title is the same and the chorus may have that repeating STOP theme as well.