Puppet on a string - Writers Forum

save-the-panda's · 03-15-2005, 06:28 PM

Puppet on a string © 2005

I wanna take back my life
I wanna pull out the knife
I wanna take back my mind
Turn back time
When my life, was mine

I’ve gotta break away from you
I’ve gotta do what I wanna do
I’ve gotta say what I wanna say
I want things, my way

Chorus
I’m not your puppet on a string
I’m not your tiny little thing
I don’t belong to you
If you think that, then you’re a fool

When I’m walking away
Don’t turn around and say
Don’t call out my name
I’m not playing your game

I don’t care
If you scream
If you bleed
If you plead

I don’t care what you think
I wanna break this link
I’ve got to be me
I no longer care, what you think, I should be

It’s time to open up your eyes
Don’t you dare deny
Can’t u realise
I’m not your puppet on a string
I’m not your...
I’m not your...

Chorus

I don't care if you cry
If you sigh
If you lie

I’m your puppet on a string
On a string
On a string

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Thanks for reading! Looking forward to your comments!

save-the-panda's · 03-18-2005, 06:17 AM

the above song was wrote long before the other songs, but i thought i would put it on here, because it is one of my favs and i would love to know what every one else thinks

save-the-panda's · 03-21-2005, 05:09 PM

Any comments?.... not even bad ones?

LazyGuitarist · 03-21-2005, 05:26 PM

One comment from me-
I like all of it except the first two "stanzas" only because it sounds very generic to me, I don't know how to explain it further but every thing else sounds very superb

thamior · 03-21-2005, 05:46 PM

the first verse is a little weird but the rest was great

save-the-panda's · 03-21-2005, 06:10 PM

Was the 'I wanna take out the knife' part that you thought was a bit weird, if so I’ll explain it…I was trying to get across the thought of being stabbed in the back and your not dwelling on the fact... hence 'take out the knife'. The rest of the 1st verse is about getting rid of that control in your life and going back to when you wasn’t under this control… does that make it less weird?

Thanks for your comments!