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Old 03-15-2005, 04:06 PM   #1
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Welcome

Verse 1-
Welcome me back to the world of the living
Welcome me back
To the sadness in forgiving
You could give life but you prefer to take
Cuz every time I accept you just change your mind and regret
Regret
When its far too late

Chorus-
Welcome me to the world of the dead
Again
Could be giving life but prefer death
Everytime I forgive and accept
You turn around and reject
Everytime I let you back in im reborn again
And everytime you lie im torn apart again

Verse-
Welcome me back to the land of the lost
Welcome me back
To an journey with no meaning or cost
You could give me a map
But prefer a companion wind
Cuz everytime I ask you for a way home you just
Just
Remind me of how much you’ve sinned

Chorus rep

Endverse-
Why, so many times
Ive told you goodbye
I told you “okay fine”
I’ve let you back in where nobody goes
But you keep getting bolder hanging with my foes
You keep pressin harder
Testing my limits
One day Ill flare off
Then the reaper will pay a visit
[but it wont be to me]

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this is about a girl whose a friend of mine, everytime she lies to me and hurts me and knows it will hurt me. When I forgive and forget she does it again to the point where its happened so many times she keeps reminding me of all the past ones with each new one, and how one of these days, im not gonna forgive her, and then shell feel like I do, dead.
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Old 03-15-2005, 07:33 PM   #2
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i liked it. But i didn't think this line fitted in
Quote:
But prefer a companion wind
... could you explane it.

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Old 03-16-2005, 05:14 AM   #3
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on the whole the song was good, however I felt the flow was off, but then again just depends on how you sing it.
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