Kajarow

(Played with Acustic Guitar)


The wind blows cold and true, threw the mountains threw and threw.
Though some do not hear its call.

Tommorow's day to fear.
And today is the day to fear.
When the wings of the dove will not save you.


The great has adawn.
And the weary pass us on.
With a loook of vengence in there eyes.



This is a song of evil taking over good in world domination, but as you can see it is just part of it..I just want to see what some people think of it, it is sort of inspirered from Stairway to Heaven.

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mammamaia

well, to be honest, you do need to do a spell check... and the meaning is not too clear in much of this, so i suggest you go back and see if it really makes any sense... there does not seem to be much, if any connection between the various bits here and there's no lyric structure to speak of...

the idea is a good one, though, so it's worth working on... i mentor a lot of would-be lyricists, so if you'd like help with it, feel free to email me...

love and hugs, maia
maia3maia@hotmail.com

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Kajarow

Well to be honest...do parts of this song make sence?


Stairway To Heaven
by Led Zeppelin
There's a lady who's sure all that glitters is gold
And she's buying a stairway to heaven
(And) when she gets there she knows if the stores are closed
With a word she can get what she came for

Ooh ooh ooh……ooh……ooh ooh ooh
And she's buying a stairway to heaven

There's a sign on the wall but she wants to be sure
And you know sometimes words have two meanings
In the tree by the brook there's a songbird who sings
Sometimes all of our thoughts are misgiven

Oooh……It makes me wonder
Oooh……It makes me wonder

There's a feeling I get when I look to the west
And my spirit is crying for leaving
In my thoughts I have seen rings of smoke through the trees
And the voices of those who stand looking

Oooh……It makes me wonder
Oooh……And it makes me wonder

And it's whispered that soon, if we all call the tune
Then the piper will lead us to reason
And a new day will dawn for those who stand long
And the forest will echo with laughter

Woe woe woe woe woe oh
If there's a bustle in your hedgerow
Don't be alarmed now
It's just a spring clean for the May Queen
Yes there are two paths you can go by
but in the long run
There's still time to change the road you're on

And it makes me wonder……ohhh ooh woe
Your head is humming and it won't go –– in case you don ́t know
The piper's calling you to join him
Dear lady can you hear the wind blow and did you know
Your stairway lies on the whispering wind

And as we wind on down the road
Our shadows taller than our souls
There walks a lady we all know
Who shines white light and wants to show
How everything still turns to gold
And if you listen very hard
The tune will come to you at last
When all are one and one is all, yeah
To be a rock and not to roll
Ooooooooooooh

And she's buying a stairway to heaven



Really?

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