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01-28-2005, 12:48 PM
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Ink Slinger
Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: Carribean
Gender: Male
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human
Human
V1
What are you gonna tell me?
About everything you expected me to be?
Who are you to tell me?
What my life should be to me?
Or what it should be to you?
Bridge-
Something I wouldn’t expect
Made me so much better
Chorus-
Never again,
Will I be human
Now that,
I’ve been hurt
I will,
Be something better
For all,
Of my life
V1-
Im no longer human, im so much more
Now that I’ve been tainted
By this polluted world
My life, is not my own, I sold myself long ago
No point to argue
That I still belong to you
Chorus repeat
*electric solo*
*drums solo*
Chorus repeat
End-
No longer human, so much more
Stil yours, but you refuse to listen
Begging this destruction, but the fuse still hissing.
Hf, reviews?
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Let's drown all our sorrows and we'll be gone till tomorrow...
Dies Irae, Dies Ilia, Solvet Saeclum In Favilla...
Yes, must still shut up.
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01-28-2005, 01:14 PM
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Best Seller
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: ohio
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Man, If I knew how to use the "qoute" thingy I would...
I really like the second verse. Very cool. The whole thing was awesome but the second verse was my favorite part! ^_^ Good job!
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01-28-2005, 02:07 PM
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Ink Slinger
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Originally Posted by Shy_Love
Man, If I knew how to use the "qoute" thingy I would...
I really like the second verse. Very cool. The whole thing was awesome but the second verse was my favorite part! ^_^ Good job!
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at the top of a post, right hand corner at top, theres a "quote" button lol ^^
and thx :>
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Let's drown all our sorrows and we'll be gone till tomorrow...
Dies Irae, Dies Ilia, Solvet Saeclum In Favilla...
Yes, must still shut up.
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01-28-2005, 04:24 PM
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Wordsmith
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This is one of your better peices mystery I really liked it, it was very good.
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01-29-2005, 12:18 AM
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Ink Slinger
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thx ^^
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Let's drown all our sorrows and we'll be gone till tomorrow...
Dies Irae, Dies Ilia, Solvet Saeclum In Favilla...
Yes, must still shut up.
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01-30-2005, 12:55 AM
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Best Seller
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I know there's a qoute button...I just don't know how to qoute just one part without qouting the whole thing.LoL ^_^
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01-30-2005, 04:31 AM
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Ink Slinger
Join Date: Jul 2004
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Originally Posted by Shy_Love
I know there's a qoute button...I just don't know how to qoute just one part without qouting the whole thing.LoL ^_^
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Erm, you just backspace all the stuff you dont want except the
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__________________
Let's drown all our sorrows and we'll be gone till tomorrow...
Dies Irae, Dies Ilia, Solvet Saeclum In Favilla...
Yes, must still shut up.
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