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Old 01-23-2005, 03:18 AM   #1
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2 new songs

Heads messed up

What am I looking for?
What am I searching for?
Where are your eyes to guide me,
In this senseless light im finding
What are these pathetic words?
What are these pathetic excuses?
When we were once as friends,
It was really known as lies

Bridge
Too much drinking
On a Saturday morning
Too much thinking
About the emotion dawning

Chorus
My heads messed up, my heads messed up
When it was okay all I did was
Find solutions
Explain delusions
But my heads messed up, and im not analyzing
Im thinking clearly
Im not compromising

End verse
My heads messed up so bad,
But suddenly I think so clear
I make decisions without my fear

Chorus repeat
V1 repeat
End verse repeat

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Dreams

V1
So many times I’ve been here
That’s what I excuse in my songs
Broken dreams that wont weak up
Honest promises that just break up
And never anything different[takes too long]
For the wounds to open up again
I said I hate these fealings,
Yet nothing more than them, give me meaning

Bridge
To my songs, what I write,
Who I love, Why I bite.

Chorus
I wanna sing about my dreams
Stead of reliving all the nightmare
Don’t wanna
Open up my wounds
To fill my pen with blood
Im sick of all the lost love

V2
And so the words are said
Theres nothing more to do
Got to bed and kiss goodnight
Find yourself and answers through the night
And never anything different[takes too long]
For the wounds to close again
Before they have to
Open up again..

Bridge+chorus rep

End
Im another dreamer,
And dreams are better than life,
Cuz in your dream, you have no control,
Cuz in your dream,
You don’t wake up anymore.

Chorus repeat.
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Summary: both songs are about how i like it more when i dont have control or myself or my mind, because then i dont stress or worry or constantly think about everything, I can relax and enjoy myself.
The first one it refers to this by getting wasted ^^
The second one refers to it as being in my dreams, where sometimes I do have nightmares from the stuff but it feels so much nicer to not wake up in your dreams and to not control anything, its so stress relieving, and yet its kind of stressing since I know my dream wont "wake up" or become reality.

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Old 01-23-2005, 02:15 PM   #2
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I think their awesome!!! You might want to go through and clean up some of the spelling and stuff but other then that I think they're great.
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Old 01-28-2005, 04:38 AM   #3
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I really liked these mystery, the songs caught me up and made me think it was really wonderful.
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Old 02-03-2005, 07:57 PM   #4
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These caught my attention as soon as I started reading. Your phrasing and choice of words is great, and it sounds very punchy and fresh. I can imagine hearing both of these on the radio.
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