Corridor

This one's quite short and punchy inspired by thought control.

The Thought Police

Take another look at the wall
The eyes will follow you around
Don’t break your back when we fall
Against the building blocks
I can’t make a choice
Between this voice or someone else’s
The thought police are here
To make it clear they’ll lock you up inside


Chorus

Carved into wood
Take an axe and chop it down
Strapped to the chair
Pull them all out one by one
Give us your blood
While we fill you up with fear
Climb to your knees
Now the thought police are here


Hide behind your skin under the skull
A little place we can call
Home they’ll huff and puff
To break it down and blow us all away
Does it make a sound?
When nothings left to hear the noise we make
The thought police are here
To make it clear they’ll lock us up inside


Carved into wood
Take an axe and chop it down
Strapped to the chair
Pull them all out one by one
Give us your blood
While we fill you up with fear
Climb to your knees
Now the thought police are here

Light the paper
Follow the trail
Light the paper
Follow the trail


Carved into wood
Take an axe and chop it down
Strapped to the chair
Pull them all out one by one
Give us your blood
While we fill you up with fear
Climb to your knees
Now the thought police are here

thamior

This was a very interesting song, I liked it but it was weird how it changed perspective for a little while. I'd say change that and thats it, I liked it alot keep writing.

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bruno718

I like the unconventional approach. I think that's perfect for a song on this topic. It doesn't rhyme much, but it doesn't have to, that's the beauty of it . . . at least in my opinion.

Did you write music for it? It seems like it should have some sort of a creepy melody for it . . . this is definitely a great song.

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evadri

Cool, I see that you're not making a political statement at all!

Like your others, it's great, but much edgier and darker. I like it, it has a lot of grunt!

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Penelope

All in all - just another brick in the wall. Sound familiar? So does this.

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