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Old 11-27-2004, 03:44 PM   #1
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I am
Alone in the crowd.
You had
Your thoughts.
It's about time...
It's about mine.
It's about time...
It's about mine.
Pick up your place...
Pick up your pace
now it's about time to pick up your friends...
now it's about time.. to go and pick up your.. friends..
Don't put
Your friends away.
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this could be catchy, but
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now it's about time to pick up your friends...
now it's about time.. to go and pick up your.. friends..
makes it weak. this needs to be strengthened a bit.
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Old 11-27-2004, 05:20 PM   #3
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though... when you really think about it... lyrics matter a little less when the music is good...
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