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Old 11-26-2004, 05:29 PM   #1
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The Gift of Sacrifice

Just one of my many dark songs.

Gift of Sacrifice

This air is so cold
This world aims me to kill
But as time grows old
I have this story to tell
I used up my life
Giving the world what it wants
After this sacrifice
You're all that's left to haunt

In this world
In this life
I have given every gift
And sacrifice
For this
For you
For life
Cause every gift I give
Is a sacrifice.

When you stretch out your hand
It's not to me
You can't see me stand
That's what I believe
You forget all the times
I've helped and saved you
Too many times for it to die
My soul is now split in two

In this world
In this life
I have given the gift
Of sacrifice
In this heart
In this soul
I'll end up alone
This is my reward
For my single choice
Of helping this world

In this world
In this life
I have given up the gift
Of sacrifice
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Old 11-26-2004, 06:52 PM   #2
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This was nice, nothing really stuck out as bad. I 'd love to know what it would be like with music.
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Old 12-15-2004, 09:14 AM   #3
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Oh, I can imagine this as a song. Very good! Especially the line, i've got a story to tell
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