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Old 11-19-2004, 04:41 AM   #1
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Song - Just look down the road

Well I havent posted any songs in awhile, but i'm better at songs than poems. In any case I havent written any worthy songs in awhile so Itook a look at some of my old stuff and found quite a bit I didnt post (or dont think I did) anyway heres one.

Theres a bit too much of everything.
And Ican't think of anything.
All these things,
And what I know.
Just seem to fall apart.

Chorus:
I'm forced to make decisions amidst confusion.
Isolated my mind faces exclusion.
Wandering and dazed,
I stumble through an ever growing maze.
- Free me from my imprisonment.
Excuse me while I lament.

Theres just some things I need to figure out.
Some things to wonder if i'm wrong or right about.
But I haven tmuch time,
and already I fall apart.
Just trying to make sense of things.

*repeat chorus*

What happened cannot be changed,
but it wasnt predestined or arranged.
I still have my free will,
to do what I can.
But do I just forget to continue on.

*repeat chorus*

Forgive me for being so unkindly rude.
Its hard to control my emotions in this mood.
But this setting hurts so much,
It reminds me of a sad, sad book.
And I guess the pages just keep flippin'.

*repeat chorus*

I may be sad for now....
--But i'll just look down the road....

Comments and critiques welcome
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Old 11-26-2004, 05:50 PM   #2
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heres the rewrite:

Theres a bit too much of everything.
And I can't think of anything.
All these things,
And what I know.
Just seem to fall apart.

I keep tryin' to make things right.
But inside im locked within a fight.
I fall apart from all this strife.

Chorus:
I'm forced to make desiscions amidst confusion.
Isolated my mind faces exclusion.
Wandering and dazed.
I stumble through an evergrowing maze.
Free me from my imprisonment.
Excuse me I must lament.

Theres just some things to figure out
I need to know what i'm wrong or right about.
But there isnt much time
And already I fade,
Just trying to make sense of things.

I know the past cannot be changed.
But I know it wasnt predestined or arranged.
So I have my future still,
And I have free will.
But can I just forget,
can I continue on.
Ist it possible for me to let,
The past be gone.

*repeat chorus*

Theres alot left for me to do.
I still have a life to go through.
And I can't always be in the down.
I know things'll turn around.
I got to look for the brighter side.
No matter what i feel inside.

*Repeat chorus*

I may be sad for now...
But i'll just look down the road.....
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Old 11-26-2004, 07:21 PM   #3
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I like it! Great job on the song! It probably would sound great along with music.
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Old 11-26-2004, 07:33 PM   #4
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I like it! Great job on the song! It probably would sound great along with music.
the original or rewrite?
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Old 11-26-2004, 09:03 PM   #5
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the rewrite was a little better than the first.
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